Friday, 4 October 2013

Peer Feedback for LIIAR Analysis

Peer Feedback for LIIAR Analysis

Peer Feedback 1:
The analysis of the different things was very detailed and you looked at the conventions as well as LIIAR itself. There was lots of clear description that was easy to understand and what you gathered from the different aspects makes me look at the magazine and see the subliminal messages. J

Peer Feedback 2:
Time management
It looks like a lot of work has gone into the analysis and it is very detailed so it has taken a lot of time and effort to write.
Areas for improvement
There are not any areas for improvement, I think it is well written and nothing needs to change or be improved.
What they did well
I think the consistency of the same magazine throughout is helpful and the analysis has been well written and in detail. Also, it is very easy to follow. You have understood the LIIAR analysis very well.

My response:

The feedback is very informative and helpful, and I am very happy with what they have said. I will take it all into consideration and make any necessary changes to my analysis.

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